Amazing.

I am in love with "If only you could see the wreck I am;" and ESPECiALLY that last stanza. All very awesome. Something i'll keep tucked in my mind.

xD

REALLY liked that. Very clever poem. I enjoyed it thoroughly. )

whoa... that's something that i like to call a b*tchslap to the face. _ i love this! rock on man! stein auf!

Relatable and has great lines! The last stanza really adds a nice little twist to it (not really twist, but..you know what I mean) and it's all just wonderful.

Loveliness Embodified In Song. (_)

Suss

Hey, this is kafkaman, the author of From the Shade of a Dream. I don't know if you recieved the email I sent you...

This poem seems visceral and very personal in a way. It seems a bit strange in the end, for someone who seems to dread losing another, to have nightmares of not remembering them. Is it supposed to mean that they're more afraid of moving on thant hey are of losing the other person?