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| Killer.Sinner.Whore 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. I am in love with "If only you could see the wreck I am;" and ESPECiALLY that last stanza. All very awesome. Something i'll keep tucked in my mind. |
| BrightSideGreen 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abusexD REALLY liked that. Very clever poem. I enjoyed it thoroughly. =) |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abusewhoa... that's something that i like to call a b*tchslap to the face. ^_^ i love this! rock on man! stein auf! |
| Susurrus 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseRelatable and has great lines! The last stanza really adds a nice little twist to it (not really twist, but..you know what I mean) and it's all just wonderful. Loveliness Embodified In Song. (^_^) Suss |
| Kafkaman 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is kafkaman, the author of From the Shade of a Dream. I don't know if you recieved the email I sent you... This poem seems visceral and very personal in a way. It seems a bit strange in the end, for someone who seems to dread losing another, to have nightmares of not remembering them. Is it supposed to mean that they're more afraid of moving on thant hey are of losing the other person? |