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Shandiin 2007-03-14 . chapter 1
Lovely! I am in love with Michelangelo's David. Every time I think about standing before it; I start crying. Odd. Well I loved your poem. Nice job!
Darth Gilthoron 2007-02-14 . chapter 1
Very original.
Can't you just pin the poster to your door or something? This is what I always do, there's a special kindof tape too which comes off easily again. Just a tip, so you get your naked artwork up at last. :)
Andrea Tiefling L 2006-09-13 . chapter 1
I have plenty of dread of contraposto. Really humourous rhyming there.I hope you were joking to suggest that the David isn't an erotic symbol?I mean, he is THE erotic male icon of the Renaissance.and doesn't every student want one in her room? Pretty distraction, neh?
Kohlomere 2006-09-10 . chapter 1
Very good, normally poetry does nothing for me. But that was terrific. Keep it up, E.
Arrows 2006-08-31 . chapter 1
HAH, this is adorable! I love the rhyme you manage with 'study / ruddy'. I too love Michelangelo's David; the lines 'He who tramples Goliath's head / And toys with his slingshot' remind me so well of that sculpture.

Keep writing :)
Orual 2006-08-26 . chapter 1
Very nice, I loved all your school references. Makes me happy to have very little homework. Also, the idea of your scandalized guests makes me laugh. I can just imagine their expressions.
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