I loved the lines "There use to be a bridge from here to there / But only crumbled rock rustles that air." and "You sigh. So far from sanity / Yet you walk on, so close to reality." To me, the poem conveys a sense of emptiness and disbelief, which I think characterize the aftermath of war quite well. Excellent writing.

beautiful, beautiful.we may need a new age of hippies, and this is a gorgeous poem that proves it.

OMG this is an amazing piece - BRAVO! you captured the emotion so well - i keep thinking im reading a professionals work! definitely a favourite