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| astral boy 2007-01-31 ch 1,   | I liked this too. It was kind of poetic. Though I think everything is kind of poetic. I still liked it though. The mystery and simplicity appealed. Thanks for your review, also. |
| Alexis Albery 2006-08-29 ch 1, | This was good. Because it was so short I thought you made wise word choices. I'm left wondering if this narrator is so content (or if he even truly is) why he 'longs to stare'. Good work. |
| Mav 2006-08-27 ch 1, | Kent! WHATTHEHELLISALOFNOR. (you never did tell me.) |