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| Enaid 2007-01-03 ch 1,   | ok so heres my thoughts one- harry has to go find the horcruxes (not sure if thats spelled right) and he knows what a couple are. I believe that his scar is one, because some of voldemorts traits like the snake tongue thing exsist in harry because of the scar, which means some of V's power is in harry. therefore harry will have to kill himself and will end up killing V too. two- Dumbledore is NOT dead. Your snape thing is a good start,a nd in case you forgot Fawke has special healing power (book 2) and most evidense points to Fawkes creating the tomb.! also ron and hermione HAVE to hook up that would be amazing. to many of the other reviews jk rowling DOES NOT use overused plot line, and anyway its the detail and twist and turns it takes that make the story 'bloody brilliant' by the way you did an amazing job at analyzing this!! |
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2006-09-07 ch 3, | Personally, I do not see how either of these reviewers could have offended you. Don't whine, people will take much more advantage of you that way. Granted, no-one forced them to read the essay, but we are all entitled to our own opinions, right? And, truth be told, I believe that each of them has a good point. JKR isn't that great of a writer. While I liked her earlier works, the sixth one just seemed like she was catering to the masses instead of writing for herself. Or either she wrote it too fast or is loosing her touch. |
| Loris 2006-08-31 ch 3, | You posted your work, invited opinions, and people have taken you at your word. Don't whine about it-- use it as an opportunity to thicken your skin. |
| jimgoo 2006-08-31 ch 3, | So how exactly did two of the reviewers criticize YOU again? Oh, please don't dedicate a chapter to me now. That'll only make me feel too special. Sally-andersonn has a good theory. |
| Sally-andersonn 2006-08-29 ch 1, | I do agree with Max Krugman to a degree. She uses the same 'tricks' that have been used before and still has millions of fans. Let's just credit that to her skill as a writer. As for my own theory, I think that Dumbledore is Voldemort, or that they are in league with each other in some way. |
| Lily Llynn 2006-08-27 ch 1, | Yea for Dumbledore not being dead!! =) A "bloody brilliant" essay. xD |
| Formerly 2006-08-27 ch 1, | It's kind of scary that even though you can use the word "whose" properly you put this much time and effort into a Harry Potter essay. And damn, J. K. Rowling is a ** plot writer anyway. She uses the same stupid tricks over and over again, plot tricks that are already overused in children's books. It doesn't really call for a lot of thought. |