This is really... I don't know how to explain it, but it reminded me of the wind. Yes, the wind. I've never claimed to be sane, except perhaps once, and I was young and foolish then.

Anyway, I really like your use of repitition of the first words. It adds a nice little touch.

Grammar:'Rest, you know you're love is here.' 'you're' should be 'your' (it shouldn't be 'you are' contracted, it should be possessive.