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breezy nostrils
2006-08-28
ch 1,
aw i know the feeling. nice work.
water lily nymph
2006-08-28
ch 1,
very intense formatting - tragic poetry in paragraphs; interesting to no end. hooray for being original. :)

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ClearViewOfTheExit
2006-08-27
ch 1,
I love poems like this. I love when you can use all five senses to really get into what the author is talking about. Your details are very nice. Thank you for sharing this.
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