Reviews for Renoir of two kingdoms

Reviews For: Renoir of two kingdoms

lilred07 2007-05-19 ch 2,	abuseawesome story i can't wait for you next chapter!
Miradel 2007-05-14 ch 2,	abusevery interesting... i like the revisions to the first chapter, it explains things better, keep it up, i would like to know where the story goes.
MrNelson007 2007-01-09 ch 1,	abuseInteresting start so far. A few typos and grammar issues here and there, but that's nothing important. So far, I like it. I would have to recommend giving your main villain a more intimidating line than "For your sake, I sure hope not." Also, you say that Willow handed the baby back to its mother, but just a few paragraphs above you talk about her dying. That seems a bit odd. That's just me being nitpicky, though. For a more general bit of advice, some more description would be helpful. Willow, for example. He drops his hood, but all you say is that his eyes are Amethyst. What does his face look like? Is his skin pale, or very dark, or something else entirely? What about his hair? The more detail you put into things, the easier it is to imagine what's going on. Still, I like where the story is going, and I'm interested in seeing more. Hope some of that helps!
Ash 2006-12-15 ch 2, anon.	abusePleas keep on writing this onw I really like it.
Flower-in-the-Night 2006-12-13 ch 2,	abuseSo far its a realli gd stori. keep up the gd work.Oh and i love the girls name Renoir that is soo cool! Update soon please.
who cares4 2006-12-06 ch 2,	abuseinteresting!...UPDATES!
cirquegirl999 2006-09-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love it! Please update this soon, I can't wait for the next chapter. It sounds really interesting and very original, please, please, please continue this!
Miradel 2006-08-28 ch 1,	abuseKeep going, i'm interested in seeing where you take the story... i like it so far
Ikuisuuden Teiden Kulkija 2006-08-27 ch 1,	abuseThis is interesting. I'll keep reading when a new chapter comes up.

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