| Reviews for Ment To Be |
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moon maiden of time 9/1/06 . chapter 1The ending is slightly cheesy but still ridiculously beautiful. But the thing is, you should really pause a moment, focus on the details, on the emotions, make it more vibrant. And maybe use real, dialog, with quotation marks...it'd probably be easier to read. |
Noelle 8/27/06 . chapter 1 you should keep going. it would be an interesting story. |
cormorant 8/27/06 . chapter 1Woot. Could use a little dialogue maybe, but i like it. Obvious refernces, eh? |