|Reviews for Ment To Be|
| moon maiden of time 9/1/06 . chapter 1
The ending is slightly cheesy but still ridiculously beautiful. But the thing is, you should really pause a moment, focus on the details, on the emotions, make it more vibrant. And maybe use real, dialog, with quotation marks...it'd probably be easier to read.
| Noelle 8/27/06 . chapter 1
you should keep going. it would be an interesting story.
| cormorant 8/27/06 . chapter 1
Woot. Could use a little dialogue maybe, but i like it. Obvious refernces, eh?