YES! JOHN MUST COME TO HER RESCUE, PLEASEE! WAH! That's too sad... sob, cry, wheeze... sob!!

Interesting so far. I'd like to know more about the bounty hunter. :D And why is it called Twisted Endings? Does that mean this story is gonna have a sad end? :-(

Hey, would you mind if I send you the rest of Backstory in email? If so, let me know at hannahrose_8@hotmail.com. Thanks! :-)

He quite simply must come to her rescue! That certainly was a twisted ending, the hero must prevail!

I liked this quite a bit, it was a nice poignant little piece with enough in it for the guys to like and the gals too (Romance, drama, babes, guns and violence!). One thing that you need to keep an eye on is your punctuations, that's all, otherwise, very good!