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| Renae K 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, hell... I haven't even finished reading this first chapter and I had to stop and tell you that I've already spluttered, coughed and laughed in the most undignified of manners. And it's all your fault! Favourite lines thus far: "Sounds quite normal, you may be thinking. But never judge a book by its cover…or opening page in this case. Maybe this Kisby character will turn out to be the Mr Darcy of Sgt Fifi’s life?" "This is the part where I introduce you to Madame Candyfloss. Reader, meet Madame Candyfloss. Madame Candyfloss, meet Reader. Now you are acquainted, I shall continue." You've got some great things going here. (I'll have to come back later and read the rest, but I'm intrigued!) |
| Reggie2chan 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWhat the hell are you on drugs? This is a funny story. |
| CallingJaneDoe 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseHow can this have cone un-reviewed! Its awesome, not in the biblical way but awesome like, wicked, badass. You know. Anyways I really like it and your particular way of writing seemes very unique, how you word things and put idea's togethers cool, and easy to read. And you deserve a review!Nothings worse than a story that deserves reviews and dosen't get em'!And because I have no idea how to end this review now, without it seeming abrupt, I'm doin this! (Does the silly review jig.) *Pass It On: Too many things go unreviewed, for every review you get, give three. |