C'mon I know you have the next chapter.

Cool! I like Zack very much...but why does Faya's name change to Kaya?

ok, good job, but first off could you please make up your mind as to what the name of your main character is? That would be helpful. Other than that, I love it- add more!

I can't wait to see what happens next. This is great!

O...symbols, Love it!

Okay, WTF?
Confused?
Kaya or Faya?
Who's where and what's going on?

Hey, I like this story. And I really like the name, Faya. Keep on writing!