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Reviews For: The Western
Kumquat21 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
Good job, quite funny! I liked it when the girl asked if Silent Night was written by Eminem.
S. Perry 2006-09-25 . chapter 1
Filled with ROFL. Seriously, that would beat my western even if I made mine a 40 book epic with special laser effects.

Sorry about the mexican joke, by the way... I just wanted the president in my story to be a typical racist buttmunch.
Gum-Gun-Explorer-Maniac 2006-09-24 . chapter 1
This was great! I feel sort of sorry for the main chracter of this story but great nonetheless. I hope to see more.

(Thanks for reviewing by the way)
Kenny's Friend 2006-09-07 . chapter 1
Humorous as always, my friend. I liked the way you blatanlty told the reader that the cowboy was schizophrenic and didn't even live in a ghost town. That sentence was great.

The rest of the story seemed a little rushed... I don't know - your other humor stories are a little better timed. I'm not sure what was wrong with it... Anyway, the story was good nonetheless.

Keep writing, my friend!
Maranwe Telrunya 2006-08-29 . chapter 1
Wow...that's absolutely hilarious! Oh my goodness. yeah... hehe

=D Maranwe Telrunya
Marionette Dancer 2006-08-27 . chapter 1
wow, im pretty sure that this is the greatest piece of mindwork ever

im totally laughing myself into hysterics...wow...i always forget how much of a gift u have for being weird until i read a piece of yours...heh...im totally sending a link to my buddies. its totally random

good job, once again.

~lexa
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