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| ~Sei. 2007-08-26 ch 5, anon. | abuseI thought I was signed in... Anyway, that chapter was far too short! That was just a sip of what is yet to come. I thought the develop in this chapter was good though, steady for an introduction, but I think there should have been more D:. Tina is falling in love with Andy isn't she? I'm going to have to look for that song you mentioned, the lyrics are great. Hope you get your summer reading done in time ^^. ~Sei. |
| allyoucaneater 2007-08-26 ch 5, | abuseoh you evil evil person!! How could I be happy with you writing your story - SHORT!! DX That's blasphemy I tell you!! BLASPHEMY!! Hope for more updates and hope people reviews this story more.. *stares* (Cant believe you just have 11 reviews) Now for my GOD-IT'S-FOR-REAL review: Good story. Plot's good.. no idea if the grammar is good or not since English is just my second language... but I don't think shortening your story too much is good... and I'm talking by experience.. I mean.. having my best friend as a beta reader (not that I ever posted my story... ^^; ) |
| new-moongirl 2007-05-11 ch 4, | abuseheh! :D nice! more! |
| Andi 2007-04-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseHey I really like your story. I don't know if you're from Maine or not but its nice to see a story involing it. Though I wouldn't consider Augusta north, unless you're down in York. Houlton is better for when you say up north. Mhm, sorry if that seemed rude I thought that you might like to know and if you didn't than totally ignore it. |
| Aki to Tarou 2007-02-08 ch 4, | abuse:o Very interesting chappies... I read 3 and 4 just now. Hm, Andy had an angsty past :/. I didn't know that he'd be hooking up with Dom, I thought it was going to be Michel xD. Was surprised too to know that Andy had that many piercings o.O. He seemed like a down to earth sweet innocent type. Well, at first heh. But now I have a different view on him xD. Keep writing, I want ice cream now too thanks T_T. ~Sei |
| Skillz of a Ninja 2007-01-22 ch 4, | abuseNo, no angst! The precious hates random angst (*yes, we do, oh yes precious*). What? My Let Dai fic? Shush, back to the pit from whence you came!! This isn't about me! *cough* Anyway . . . SNOW DAY! Hey, by the way, do the protest on Wednesday! And email people out-of-town about it. Maybe we can get other schools to do it! ~The insane one with *Skillz of a Ninja* |
| The Phoenix Knight 2007-01-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis story is awesome!! I can't wait for more! TPK |
| Skillz of a Ninja 2007-01-11 ch 3, | abuseOk, where's my cookie dough icecream? Just kidding . . .. Good chappie! But where's the yaoi scene? Is that next chapter? So Andy's BI . . didn't catch that one before. Oh, and I think my blond goth story will be going up within the next month! Be excited (or afraid . .)! ~Skillzez |
| Aki to Tarou 2006-12-15 ch 2, | abuseLet's have Andy meet his lover now :D. Oh yeah, and the goth girl is cool too. I |
| Skillz of a Ninja 2006-10-07 ch 2, | abuse(you know I'm just gonna review every chapter since I'm too lazy to email you . . .. )Good chappie. But what's with the random Goth girl? She's a cool character, but I'm a tad confused . . .And yes, I will post *coughsomedaycough* ~Skillz of a Ninja |
| CrazyWeird 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseCool. |
| lilith 2006-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abusei love it, keep going, pretty please? |
| Skillz of a Ninja 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseDude, Massachusetts! |