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| multiples of six 2007-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseHaha! This is so weird, and cute, and.. well, mostly weird.. but in a good way! =D |
| Lizzy-Lou 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseCute, cute, cute! Been kinda a rough day, but this made me smile! I just got a new swimming suit... maybe I'll feel this great when I where it. (Yeah, right.) Anyway, a fun, well-written piece of writing! Well done! |
| misterfuzzums EXTREME 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseDang... I need to buy some new socks...Pretty funny and upbeat... I like it. However, the sentence where the old lady is talking about the perfume is in past tense, whereas the rest of the story is in present. Sorry, that just bothered me for some reason. Nice work. I salute your duck-sock ways. |
| Alena D'Etoiles 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG! That is so cute! I love it so much! This is going into Favs right this second. Keep writing...or else. o_O |
| An-Author-At-Heart 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuseLOL! This is SOO funny! Robert, wow, named socks, and I love the line "Not to mention the bike rides in the park - he loved the trees" . That's an awsome line. The whole story's all so fun, cute and nice, very enjoyable. The only thing I found wrong were a couple of grammar mistakes here and there. Though it's not much. Overall, it's all so pleasant, I liked this. Good job! |