Reviews for Frogs , warts and kisses

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Bubbles1357 2008-10-07 ch 26,	abuse:D love your story. So excited for the next part. :)
Andy Lex Bain 2008-10-02 ch 26,	abuseOk, this is pretty awesome, I think you've definitely improved since the beginning of this story! There's not much to critique, I think the pace is good and the action is good, love the monkey/spider shifts, I was wondering where you got the inspiration for them from? There's only really one thing I can say was a mistake - the bat shift's eyes started off violet, then you changed them to amber. But other than that, a great read! Can't wait to read the concluding chapter... Andy
Alteng 2008-08-26 ch 26,	abuseThere's definately a lot of action in this chapter. Actually, the part where Trist and Sage are running about in the basement of the old house reminds me of what could have been a dream sequence. I've got some pieces of stories written off of dreams. Amazing what the subconscious comes up with. I think with as hard as Sage is grabbing Trist's wrist, she ought to be thinking, thank goodness for those pain killers. The scene where she actually black out is good with the skip forward. I was put out to have my wisdom teeth cut out, and it was the weirdest thing. One moment it was one in the afternoon and I was in the oral surgeon's chair, and the next it was 5 and I was somewhere else . . . can't remember where I woke up, but I do remember it was really weird to have lost that time with no conscious thought of sleep. Although it is inconvenient, I think Trist has recovered from her head trauma a bit fast. I don't know a lot about such ailments, but the thug did hit her pretty hard, and she seems to have snapped out of it pretty quick for the end of this chapter. Another thing, I would change the bit about the thug being Hispanic. It is not an important thing for the story, and you might be accused of stereo-typing. He is not a very important character, a big, gruff man would do. Otherwise, the addition of this trouble was a nice touch. A nice cliffy as well. Now, you've got every one wondering if Trist is dead or worse, and what about poor Sage?
Alteng 2008-08-25 ch 25,	abuseWell, I am back for more, I guess. It has been a long time, and I am glad you gave an update to things. Davies is indeed a mean one, and it seems like Tristin is always getting her throat in between someone's hands. Just a curious little thought. If the shifts are impervious to bullets, why would Davies need to run away. Couldn't he just change forms, finish his job on Tris, then eat a few cops without worry? Am I a pain or what?
NHKZ 2008-08-02 ch 25,	abuseFinally managed to find time to read this chapter. waiting for the next one! :)
Andy Lex Bain 2008-06-01 ch 24,	abuseWell, this is better. The action is certainly picking up, the blood is good. But I think you need to work on character names...Sage, Gordon and Davies are a little mundane. Plus I think for online stories shorter chapters are better, as many people don't like reading too much on a screen. Well, I look forward to this story's end!
sarilaelfa 2008-05-16 ch 24, anon.	abuseagain? oh no!! tha't can't be good!! aw poor good sage! who's going to save her!!
stuck in a Book 2008-05-13 ch 24,	abuse::Gasp:: What a shocker ! Well not really , kinda figured it was coming , well at least the bit about Gordon . Some weird square things popped up towards the end of the chapter... should fix that . Tons of questions after reading this chapter and also tons of them answered ...sort of . Over all nice chapter and good luck with all the wedding stuff ,can't wait for the next chapter !
sarilaelfa 2008-05-08 ch 23, anon.	abuseit was good... i liked it better...well bye and post!
Arn 2008-04-12 ch 5,	abuseHmm interesting plot so far, really. The only thing i thought was weird was how everyone seems to be trying to convince Trist that she has some sort of crush over Sage, which seems to rush the story. Just because he's handsome they think she likes him? and every small thing she does to hint that she likes Sage makes them smile and stuff. You know what i'm saying? Anyway, I kinda liked it so far. I'm not one into much romance stories, especially frog-related ones, but I think its turning out nicely.
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 21,	abuseO what illegal scream is Chris plotting? _ Ha, that smiley looks like it's been hypnotized! I an SOO angry that Chris beleaives a stranger over his sister, but I understand why and all that. This chapter was intresting and I loved it--much like all your other chapters^_^
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 20,	abuseThis chapted ended nicely^_^ I can't wait to see what they have cooked up evil grin
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 19,	abuseThat's crazy! I was so angry when Sage did that, so angry when Chris acted like it was nothing--what a brother! I'm just gonna laugh it off, but gah you can really envelope someone in a story! Great job!
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 18,	abuseI think it's her brother calling her name and begging her to breathe--to live--but you never know! ^_^ I hope she lives, actually the only reason I'm not freaking out right now is I don't think she's going to die. hoping like hell is more like it x_x
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 17,	abuseOH MY GOSH! WOAW! You are good gore writer! grins evily I love this chapter, so suspenceful! I really wanted to reach into the story and slap Tristins brother for not beleaving her about Sage! But now there is some pritty good proof for him! What does the title of this chapter mean? I've never heard it before, and I'm feeling stupid o_o lol

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