Reviews for Frogs , warts and kisses

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Brother Andyn 2008-06-01 ch 24,	abuseWell, this is better. The action is certainly picking up, the blood is good. But I think you need to work on character names...Sage, Gordon and Davies are a little mundane. Plus I think for online stories shorter chapters are better, as many people don't like reading too much on a screen. Well, I look forward to this story's end!
sarilaelfa 2008-05-16 ch 24, anon.	abuseagain? oh no!! tha't can't be good!! aw poor good sage! who's going to save her!!
stuck in a Book 2008-05-13 ch 24,	abuse::Gasp:: What a shocker ! Well not really , kinda figured it was coming , well at least the bit about Gordon . Some weird square things popped up towards the end of the chapter... should fix that . Tons of questions after reading this chapter and also tons of them answered ...sort of . Over all nice chapter and good luck with all the wedding stuff ,can't wait for the next chapter !
sarilaelfa 2008-05-08 ch 23, anon.	abuseit was good... i liked it better...well bye and post!
Arn 2008-04-12 ch 5,	abuseHmm interesting plot so far, really. The only thing i thought was weird was how everyone seems to be trying to convince Trist that she has some sort of crush over Sage, which seems to rush the story. Just because he's handsome they think she likes him? and every small thing she does to hint that she likes Sage makes them smile and stuff. You know what i'm saying? Anyway, I kinda liked it so far. I'm not one into much romance stories, especially frog-related ones, but I think its turning out nicely.
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 21,	abuseO what illegal scream is Chris plotting? _ Ha, that smiley looks like it's been hypnotized! I an SOO angry that Chris beleaives a stranger over his sister, but I understand why and all that. This chapter was intresting and I loved it--much like all your other chapters^_^
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 20,	abuseThis chapted ended nicely^_^ I can't wait to see what they have cooked up evil grin
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 19,	abuseThat's crazy! I was so angry when Sage did that, so angry when Chris acted like it was nothing--what a brother! I'm just gonna laugh it off, but gah you can really envelope someone in a story! Great job!
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 18,	abuseI think it's her brother calling her name and begging her to breathe--to live--but you never know! ^_^ I hope she lives, actually the only reason I'm not freaking out right now is I don't think she's going to die. hoping like hell is more like it x_x
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 17,	abuseOH MY GOSH! WOAW! You are good gore writer! grins evily I love this chapter, so suspenceful! I really wanted to reach into the story and slap Tristins brother for not beleaving her about Sage! But now there is some pritty good proof for him! What does the title of this chapter mean? I've never heard it before, and I'm feeling stupid o_o lol
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 16,	abuseTha homeless guy was scary! I've had a weird guy like that come up to me and say "Would you happen to have any cocane, may-aim?" I was scared so bad I couldn't talk straight and had to whimper my response, so it was humiliating as well. I was like "holy **, does he go around asking evrybody that?" Back to this chapter ^_^ It was freaking awsome! I can't wait to read the next one, and the wonderful thing about that is I don't have to wait! :)
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 15,	abuseI would be ** if my BROTHER didn't beleave me as well! I think I'm belaving the dog shift thingy aat this point. ^_^ Your story is so fun! I'm glad it's so long! It sucks when I come across those stories where they have so much potential to make it like a grand novel or something but they just wrap it up all cliche and short, it's like "aww, this could have been so magnificent." Lol, anyways--great work! kudos or brownie points lol
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 14,	abuseGRAH! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I think your story is becoming a drug for me--it's not your fault though; I'm weird like that >_< lol, I think I would have hid under my blackets as well if I had heard a monster calling my name! ^_^ I used to do that when I was younger--convince myself a monster was under my bed (my closet wasn't very scary) and I would sit under the blacket for like hours just trying to get the courage to touch my feet to the floor so I could run away. lol, I even conviced all my freinds a monster was under there, lol. ^_^
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 13,	abuseThis chapter was fan-freakin-tastic as well! lol, this story has developed really nicely :) I think I would be just as scared of bunnies as she is if one has frekin murdered one guy and indirectly murdered his buddie too! -_- These are serious matters--so why can't I stop freaking laughing? ^_^ I really should get some work done but I dont think I'm going to; I think I'm gonna keep reading your story and do all my work at the lastminute o_o (this smiley is fun too!)
Roman C Lee 2008-04-06 ch 12,	abuseYAY! This chapter was awsome (of cource!) and I can't wait to read the next one ^_^ I'm hopeing tristin wont go to the farmhouse alone--but I can understand how she feels; I can't get a good nights sleep unless I'm at home, in my own bed _ To the next chapter! lol

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