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| dangelicessence 2006-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseYou said that you were going to go back and edit. Don't. This is perfect. The images and feelings the story evokes are astounding. I was literally speechless when I finished. That was very deep. I know no one likes those reviews that give no critisism but I honestly have nothing to contribute that will make the story better. |
| whatsit 2006-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this. It's so dark and beautiful. And the descriptions are amazing, it was a bit confusing in the beginning but I've honestly never read anything like this before. |