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| Trinity Dragon 2006-09-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis was long. But I read it, and now I'm finally reviewing! So, as it is, I enjoyed it quite a bit. If you took the time to expand some of the scens, you could have yourself a classic theatre piece to be performed for years. I especially liked the ending with the letter. Azul Celeste. God bless, Lord Pyro (Trinity Dragon) |