|Reviews for Midnight Rider|
| lostladyknight 9/12/08 . chapter 1
This was awesome! I loved the story you told with poetry. I wish I was that talented!
| Twilight Starr 10/29/07 . chapter 1
Historical poem. I like the title. Good job!
| sylvia's syndrome 8/28/06 . chapter 1
Nice work, overall. I couldn’t help but notice, though, that the first two lines do not rhyme. While they both end with ‘-ing’ that does not make them rhyme. For example, ‘screaming’ rhymes with ‘teeming’ but not ‘breaking.’ If you tweaked the wording in those lines to make the entire poem rhyme, I think it would be improved as a whole. Keep writing!