Wow...

Simple yet cute...

Aww...

Aw. That's absolutely adorable! It's so cute and i love that things like this really do happen in real life.

Heh. This gave me the giggles : ) Sounds like some people I know, honestly. Nice job!

HAWT MAMA!

i like this one a lot! this is a really, really fresh breath of air. i absolutely adore the way the story unfolded through the mails of these two individuals (maybe more like text messages, LOL). the story made me "Aw..." at the end, it was so cute.

damn. i love this story so much i'll be recommending this as a particularly amusing anecdote. just had to drop a review.

next time!

~DD

so fabulous! I really, really, liked it!

It made me laugh a few times. the situation described is very practical! I really liked it!

Good work!

-Sa x33

indi ko partz mayo kaichindi. sinsya gid hina ko sa english. hehe

that was so cute!

Aw! What a cute little story! I likeded the ending too.

Cute story..Kind of funny

Cool way to write a short story. Thought it was cute and funny.

Haha! That was short, simple, funny and sweet!! You really have a knack for making short stories!! ^_^

You're good at this stuff.. I hope you make another one shot sooN!