even if a little sick and twisted, spyro and abe's chemistry is pretty entertaining. and i find it quite fitting that i'm reading this after a raccoon just nearly attacked me, well i assume so because i had subway in my hand, but it was so cute! i feel bad...it was making cat noises and it was something like a horror movie for a split second because i heard a noise and turned around and saw its bushy little tail disappear between the bushes and then my key would work fast enough in the door..it was ridiculous. but i want to go feed it:( my hand might possibly get chewed off...
anyways...good work!

Oh my, that was...something. Thoroughly entertaining. Update soon...

God I love this story. It's like a cliché yet at the same time not a cliché. Keep up the good work.

ah damnit, i love this. spyro is one hell of a character. incredibly entertaining and funny. ;)

GOD.
You really need to update.
They're both so effed up, it's not even funny. And that makes it all the more fun to read! Seriously though... COME BACK TO LIFE.
:D

ahh i'm reading this again and i just love it. its 4 parts insane, 3 parts witty, 2 parts chemistry with a great storyline. great twist on your typical high school novel. you're definitely refreshing to read!

Wow. This story is EPIC. FTW. I LOVE DIS ASSHATERRY. Please update! Fantastic character dialogue!
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Its so refreshing to be able to read something so different. Your characters, although insane, are believable and of course, extremely entertaining. Keep writing on : D

THIS IS GENIUS. I FUCKING LOVE YOU.

you're a very entertaining writer.
i mean your spyro's and abe's personalities, genius.
makes me wonder what goes on in your head though.

This story is growing on me, though I really REALLY hate cruelty to animals. I try to skip past those bits.

When I first started to read this story I was like WTF!? these people like killing raccoons and pyromaniacs but the more I read the more I liked. At some parts I couldn't stop laughing. Then I was at chapter 8 and was devestated that it was over (well technically not over but not finished). So please do finish this I want to know who A.B. is.


and thank you for kicking plagiarisers asses!!

AND IT'S SO FLIPPING FUNNY TOO.
i was just on your profile and saw that it won the best awkward moment..i assume for the whole dinner situation. god...the moan-giggle...i almost died.

oh my god..this story is amazing. the chemistry between them! your writing - every word is an adventure. your story's still pretty short so far, but it seems longer than most because you make every word count - there's no fluff. who knew crazy people could be so damn interesting.. on the edge of my seat for an update!

AHH this is twisted and hilarious! Love it. It's a refreshing to see after chapters of angsty 'I love you but I have a crucial yet ultimately insignificant flaw that is could be detrimental to our relationship' kind of thing. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!