Reviews for when she sang - FictionPress.com

alice is dying 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abuseI always took your penname for granted because it semed so simple, but now I realize how much pain there must be behind it. I absolutly adore this piece, as well as the rest of your work. It's gorgeous and heartbreaking and tearjerking and paininducing. Lovely.♥ Alice
by His blood 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abuseyour writing makes me want to cry. not only because i can relate to all of it, but because it's just heartbreaking in its beauty. 'as if her voice could heal all the sadness i had ever felt/as though heartbreak never even touched me' -- ** gorgeous. my favorite part of a beautiful poem. 'and now, she isn't here and everything seems real all over again. (why did you leave me)' -- so beautiful, and i know exactly how she feels. and the ending is just heart-wrenching, cutting through everything. so beautiful.
dress her up in fairytales 2006-08-28 ch 1,	abuse"as if her voice could heal all the sadness/i had ever felt/as though heartbreak never even touched me." POWERFUL. i love it. this piece is sad but beautiful. going on my fav. list.
the duck in the rain 2006-08-28 ch 1,	abuseheartbreaking. just dripping with emotion. wonderful. the first stanza was best for me, it anchored me to the words and i couldn't look away from the screen. it's clear this subject brings forth a lot of emotion for you -and to let your reader feel it too? wonderful. powerful, beautiful. great work.