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| RPeterson 2006-09-24 ch 1,  | abuseIt's a nice story that was fun to read. |
| Oswald 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abusemy toe-nail could weave a more creative fable then what you produced, scum. Back when I was locked away in a secluded envirement during the war, passerbys would shake their head and donate their saliva and let it drip in strands into my hair so I could grease up and look like a fighter pilot for when the guards came a walkin. During this period, I entered into a symbiotic relationship with a slime mold, allowing it to attach itself to my ear lobe...the times we had together on those moonless nights lying upon the ground in the cell floor, hearing the jibber-jabber of them greasy chinese fellows barking out insults to each other. The slime mold, whose name happend to be Ferdinand, told great fables, much better then your pathetic excuse for a "fable." Go find Ferdinand in Florence, Italy, wheres hes currently residing, attached to a female silverback gorilla named Marcus. He could weave you a fable as you have never heard, especially something better then your blibber-blabber. I'm out, dawg. Word, The oswald |
| gold against the soul 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is a gorgeous short story, bright and dazzling and fanciful, almost like a fairy-tale. I enjoyed it immensely, and it made me smile. gold against the soul |