some really beautiful imagery here, and it has a really natural flow to it. a really lovely piece here hon _ keep it up. x

omg so cute i love this piece n yea it is kinda smooshy but smoosh is god so keep it havent been on in ages life's been kinda mad :P nehoo good work Duck8 xox

Yep sappy, but I still like the rhyming.

very romantic and BIG.

To mushy. Is it from romeo/juliet? :D

pretty but a bit hard to believe

Wow great poem, really meaningful and I really liked it! Good luck with your GCSEs! I know how much they suck but they'll be over soon!love, vix x