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| girl without wings 2006-08-28 ch 1,  | abuseI found the lack of punctuation in this very confusing. I couldn’t tell when one thought ended and another started. All the words in this just blurred together into on long, rambling, bewildering sentence… I honestly have no idea what I just read. It’s just a blur. I also noticed at least one spelling mistake. Maybe with a little reworking you could make this piece more coherent. |