This is a very good poem! There's this tired pleading tone to it that really makes the poem come at you. Good job!

not your best.. I love the first stanza a lot, but the rest wasnt as good... those two last lines didnt seem like a strong enough plea for me

Great work, well written as always. Keep it up!

Anna _

'I don't want your lies, however much the truth hurts', sometimes it's better to not know everything there is to know about someone. But that's just what I think :-) I love this poem though!

Much love, Rosanna.

I don't like it either when people lie to you about this kinda stuff. It's always like you put your emotions right into the poem. You always do great with that.

But I wanna see some happy stuff _ Think you can? Not everything in life is depressing and even though getting it out is great, can't focus on only the bad.