it's so hopeful, I'd like to think that's true, well, the poem is good.

Wow.. like me :D lol nice poem kay. Keep it up. You should like show tia this *yeah like she'll listen*


Kristie Marie

aw I like this ! Oh and chapter 8 is out ^ ^ 9 wow a day earlier then I anticipated ! )

this poem is lovely =). I particulary like lines 4-8. Its nicely written, with great and v uplifting content. The first couple of lines bounce abit but it evens out. Nice work

~Bex xx