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| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseNice visuals. I can picture this. |
| Buritani89 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abusehm. |
| King Krod von Bopper 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI like it. And I understand now what you meant by my (mis)use of parenthesis. Yours is deliberate, mine was meant as if sung, to be done by backup vocals. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI like the specific details in this. It really guides the reader into the situation described. Good work. |