|Reviews for Optimism|
| Heatless Flame 6/27/07 . chapter 1
Hmm. This is a poem that certainly expresses many young writer's state of mind, my own included. But bravo, very nice metaphors.
| pixieofdarkness 9/4/06 . chapter 1
I want to be happy.
Please make me happy.
thats great, its my favirtie part, i like how u used repetion, nice
| Nine-Black-Roses 8/31/06 . chapter 1
this is really goodvery like wat you have done with donex
| Torn and Tattered 8/28/06 . chapter 1
so... this had a nice rhythm, but it wasn't my favorite (sry)... you advertised me... thank you... ) appreciate it. later gal.