| Reviews for Optimism |
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Heatless Flame 6/27/07 . chapter 1Hmm. This is a poem that certainly expresses many young writer's state of mind, my own included. But bravo, very nice metaphors. Heatless |
pixieofdarkness 9/4/06 . chapter 1I want to be happy. Please make me happy. My fantasies, Aren’t real. thats great, its my favirtie part, i like how u used repetion, nice |
Nine-Black-Roses 8/31/06 . chapter 1this is really goodvery like wat you have done with donex |
Torn and Tattered 8/28/06 . chapter 1so... this had a nice rhythm, but it wasn't my favorite (sry)... you advertised me... thank you... ) appreciate it. later gal. -Phoenix |