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Heatless Flame
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuseHmm. This is a poem that certainly expresses many young writer's state of mind, my own included. But bravo, very nice metaphors.
~Heatless
pixieofdarkness
2006-09-04
ch 1,
abuseI want to be happy.

Please make me happy.

My fantasies,

Aren’t real.

thats great, its my favirtie part, i like how u used repetion, nice
Nine-Black-Roses
2006-08-31
ch 1,
abusethis is really goodvery like wat you have done with clouds.well donex
Tragic and Devastated
2006-08-28
ch 1,
abuseso... this had a nice rhythm, but it wasn't my favorite (sry)... you advertised me... thank you... =) appreciate it. later gal.

-Phoenix
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