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| Heatless Flame 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseHmm. This is a poem that certainly expresses many young writer's state of mind, my own included. But bravo, very nice metaphors. ~Heatless |
| pixieofdarkness 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseI want to be happy. Please make me happy. My fantasies, Aren’t real. thats great, its my favirtie part, i like how u used repetion, nice |
| Nine-Black-Roses 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abusethis is really goodvery like wat you have done with clouds.well donex |
| Tragic and Devastated 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseso... this had a nice rhythm, but it wasn't my favorite (sry)... you advertised me... thank you... =) appreciate it. later gal. -Phoenix |