LOVE IT! I told you that! Whoo-hoo!

-Rey

I don't know. i kind of expect songs to rhyme. While I'm agnostic, I respect your point of view, but it seems like you're working against yourself in this song. You have all sorts of examples of blood and pain- maybe you should give a few hypothetical situations of god's work, his help. Tell us how the little girl was saved, you know? Make us believe it, if only for the duration of the song.