Hm... this chapter didn't really have much material[as in terms of plot] in it, but you explained that at the end. What might've been better was to introduce them through their actions instead of spilling all the details now...but you may have different intentions. (:

Aw I love Liam ALREADY! He sounds like such a hottie. =P

This is the first story I have read on this site! I really like it so far. I'd really like to know what happens with Liam and Allison. What got me was how you threw in the remark about 'past tense' in the last sentence of the first chapter. I suppose this is the complication of the story then? I wonder what happens to them. Please post more soon!

This chapter was good! A lovely start!

I can't wait to read more of both stories now!

UPDATE!

~Tzotel