oh, wow. this is way cool! :D

i wish i could write poetry like this!

Exquisite images and emotions. Espeicially, "Rain falls and pierces my skin/Splashing against my face," Gorgeous. Keep writing, s.

wow i love it! truly i donot much to say other than that really

so eerie and beautiful. just the kind i like. i think your imagery was near perfect in this one...thanks for writing. if i may ask, what were you feeling when you wrote this?