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Reviews For: It's Not So Hard To Be A Hero

candyaddict
2006-09-14
ch 1,
abuse"when she can’t hold on long enoughto save herself from hers."

Those lines are beautiful. And dang, you put angst into such great style.
Jorda K Terre
2006-08-30
ch 1,
abuseThis is amazing and your writing style is awesome. I can kind of relate to this, but only just a little bit. Regardless, good job. And thanks for all the comments. :)
fairEtales
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseDenial. Ah...Yes. I know the feeling. Although I can't say that I have found true love myself, let's pretend I've come pretty close, okay? Let's just pretend that I know what I'm talking about. Here goes.

While she's trying to push those feelings down, the feelings are simply pushing harder. She can't do anything about it. The feelings are still there, like it or not. Sure...her heart's ripped in half, torn to shreads, after what happened. But, think about it, what pieces it back together? Hormones, babe. And what tore it apart? See previous answer. It's not anyone's fault what happened. It's the way of life. Simple as that...well, maybe not...but whatever. Our little hero, Spin Cyclone Girl, is falling deep for her man, Trouble-Eyes. He dug the hole for her, knowing that he might hurt her one day (thought, praying he won't), yet hoping the fall wouldn't be as bad. Don't you see? It does hurt, yes. But, he was doing the best he could NOT to hurt her. At least give him some credit for that.

As always, I loved it. Really makes me think and provokes really vivid images in my head. Amazing job.
Runic Binary
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseHow...how do you do this? How do you write stuff like this that makes me read it twice and STILL be amazed the second time? I don't think I'll ever figure it out.

You know...I'm not sure I want to. Just as long as you keep it up. :)
CTWWFTP
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseWow. Excellent.
Caitlin Kane
2006-08-28
ch 1,
abuseI love this. Especially how it's formatted and the images it gives me are fantastic. I can see the story behind it played out in my mind.

Outstanding.
Padimate
2006-08-28
ch 1,
abuseI love this. It's putting images in my head and I love the way it's written and how the type is all fun and yeah. Good stuff.
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