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| Chop Suey 2007-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseHoly **! I'd say you jacked that from Room 1401, only you wrote this before that. o.o |
| Ironman316 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI didnt think this was your best one, you have great imagery but sometimes you go into to muc hdetail when its not needed for example when you described the family that walked into dennys it was a little unnecessary but i thought your writing technique was really good. |