I love this piece. I really like how its written; like a conversation between two people or a conversation going on within someone's mind. Well done! This is going on my favorites.

that was really really good i liked that a lot. is that about your sister?

Wow, that's powerful. It's cool, the way it's kind of a conversation (is it a conversation? It feels like one). It also seems at one point as though the drink is talking to the person, but then it kind of doesn't anymore. It's really good, powerful, sad, and has a feeling that all hope is lost at the end.