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M.R.Sanner 2008-05-31 ch 31,	abuseCongratulations on finishing this story ! That is a feat onto itself to be able to finish something that is . This story has been a true pleasure to read from the very beggining to the very end . Will has always been such a great character and ever since Ryn has came into the story so has she (I really do adore her) and of course the Mother, evil ** that she is , is an awesume character . The ending was cute and is there going to be a sequeal ? If so that would be awesume ! And if not it is a good ending of it entirely . Once again congratulations on finishing ! M.R.Sanner
They Got It Wrong 2008-04-21 ch 31,	abuseThat was sweet, but surely it can't end there!
Kayla Christine 2008-03-26 ch 30,	abuseOh my God it's done :( that's so sad... I can't believe I've been gone so long that everyone has finished their stories! It was amazing and I hope to see more from you soon! I've updated Chasing Princes with and EXTRA long chapter, if you'd like to read! Kayla Christine
Estrella Drage 2007-06-29 ch 2,	abuseI like where this is going. It is very twisted and intriguing. Your words flow well, and I don't have anything to suggest except maybe using more of the vast vocabulary you have. Good job! Tris
Mistress of Shadows 2007-04-06 ch 25,	abuseOnce again, a stunning installment. The twists just keep coming, and I love how the story is progressing. There's the tiniest tease of a romance between Ryn and Will, Phil is at once dysfunctional and normal, and the Queen... Well, all that to say - you're an amazing writer and I look forward to the next chapter.
turquoisewaters 2007-02-11 ch 24, anon.	abuseomg, so frickin good! it's nice to kno how important will is to Phil, but the fact that Phil has gone crazy is...sad. or, maybe it's just a side effect of the potion...hm,i guess only you kno for now well, anyway, ur an amazing author, please keep updating!
Mistress of Shadows 2007-02-11 ch 24,	abuseOh, my goodness! So, I'm guessing that the queen has been giving Phil a potion to make him think that Will is there...no wonder he's alright with the whole wedding thing - he thinks that his brother's gonna help him out of the mess! 0.0 Nice twist. Can't wait until the next chapter!
Alteng 2007-02-11 ch 24,	abuseSounds like me. I wanted to get Part IV of Bane of Rendsberg to the poitn where they are at the festival before the actual date . . . March 23. Oh well, to the chapter. A lot of suspense going on here. I wonder how long before the Queen catches up to the spy, and what will Will do. Sling Phil over his shoulder and run, and hope that his elven friends can help him. It does make you wonder what the Queen has been up to!
turquoisewaters 2007-02-06 ch 23, anon.	abusewhoopee! another chapter!!
Alteng 2007-01-25 ch 23,	abuseYeah, Phil was a bit off, but he's not the brightest bit either. Would he have truly thought about telling his mother such a lie as searching for his father. As for the bard, he's still entertaining. I would have thought that there would be more to do about him admitting to having seen William . . . like Ryn smacking him in the head when they were in the clear . . . then again, the weirdness stems from Phil not pursuing the issue further.
Technical-Difficulties 2007-01-24 ch 5,	abusethis is really cool. you did a good job
M.R.Sanner 2007-01-08 ch 22,	abuseI cna't wait for an update ! You have to update soon !
M.R.Sanner 2007-01-08 ch 21,	abuseanother great chapter ,waiting to read thses paid off ,they are awsume chapters !
M.R.Sanner 2007-01-08 ch 20,	abusewow this chapter was amazing , really it was .I enver expected this to happen ,never, I LOVE the twist ::hearts:: . Awsume job .
Alteng 2007-01-05 ch 22,	abuseSwallow! What a name! Oh well, he's an elf, and he probably likes it. I can't remember the significance of different birds, but I am certain that you are playing with that on him. Oh well! Anyway, the twists and turns follow, and I think that Swallow might have a girlfriend, and Will will have to ask about this fiance! At least it's not his mom!

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