omg you updated so fast ! I like this chapter though it is short ! O amybe it seemed short because I was reading it really fast .

Yah Ichi is a butt-head ! I felt so sorry for fuko *sp* ! OMG perfect girl evolution is an naime ! Yes ! Man I've been so ot of touch on the whole anime loop lately , probally because Im broke . Lol . Awsume& today is oct.3rd ! Yes ,today is an awsume day !

Awsume chaoter can't wait for more !

Write on .

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woot! New chapter ! Yay , can't wait for the next chapter !

OMG I just read ur profile and I luvies you ! Woot Parfait Tic totally rox ! Omg which do u like more Daiya-kun or Ichi-kun ? I personally love Daiya-kun *sp* ! I mena he is just so darn sweet ! ::squeals:: Gosh that reminds me I ahve to read the new chapters they posted !

Oh ! I also love Perfect Girl Evolution ( also known as The Wallflower ) , I ahve yet to buy the new one though ! Sunkao is so kewl ! I love her , she is my kind of friend & she reminds me a little bit of my self !Lol !

Lol ! Oh I totaly know what she would say about the Queen in this story ! SHe would be like " Let's torture some ppl ." lol !

Ok wow didn't mean to rant this much about manga ( which I am like totally obsessed over (

I can't believe it's been lets see 12-7 5! five chapters since I read this! I must've lost my mind, seriously! Actually I just haven't been on... but great chapters!

I know how annoying it is to mix up names, totally sucks. You'll get it right eventually though, don't worry! Expect a new chapter from Chasing Princes soon ok? Good.

Kayla Christine

Oh no! Poor Will!

I know no Norwegian at all. I know some German and some Latin. I like the idea that you choose norwegian over Latin for a spell. it's different.

Poor Will! He and that mule have too much in common. And I would guess because of the spell Will won't be going in to the blood frenzy.

Yeah, I am getting Will and Phil mixed up,too, but I have a funny methos for that one.

The bard is a funny little fellow. Somehow, I have pictures of Kel going through my mind (He's the bard in the Purple Unicorn), but your fellow is a legitmate bard. Oh well, entertaining piece, and I am getting interested in how the queen can get odder. I have some weird ideas myself.

Mort is still a fun little fellow, but I am surprised that no one ate the carrier pigeon . . . the queen will later.

I kind of figured that the gift of the dukedom had something to do with getting Will out the castle. I would think that he would be equally happy. I think he is.

Oh, and I appreciate the comments on "Irony of Fate". For some reason, I write on that story in December and January. Oh, and White Arrow and Christopher are not the same. That is coming up in the next chapter when I work it out. Christopher was at another fish fry at that time.

Indeed Sleeping Beauty. I am jealous. I have no poetic skills at all. Somehow, though, I think that the bunch would be none too pleased with this song. It had nothing to do with food, unless an ogre or troll went out and ate the princess.

Doesn't Will know that Phil is probably going to end up wherever the princess is? Poor guy. Everyone keeps leading him on chases.

Entertaining as usual. Mort reminds me of a picture that I have seen somewhere, but I can't place it.

The beginning of this chapter should be earlier on in the story, because it does explain a lot about the queen. And I would take it that the queen is full ogre, but she does not seem stupid. Is she an exception among her race.

Again, I do like how you have presented this story, and I like your characters.

Somehow, I figured that LeMori was part elf, but I couldn't tell you why. Just a feel . . . So, was the boy made into a meal . . . shredded duke on a platter.

You know, I would think that the queen would not manage so many lovers . . . money or no, just because of her nature and nasty eating habits.

Another exciting chapter indeed. I guess Will does go mad at the sight of blood. Hey, I like writing with two different realities.

The maid is intriguing, but I would have thought her honest in not knowing what happened unless it was a public spectacle.

O, more intrigue. Poor LeMori and family. I like how you are leaving things hanging. Good writing devises here.

Poor maid!

O, nice one. You have to love the queen indeed. It is a wonder though that she is not dethroned because of her husband leaving. Still, it works, and this chapter is by far the best I have read in this story.

Okay, now that I have quit getting stuck on Chapter 2 . . . don't ask.

It is intereseting how this has been set up. More and more surpirses coming along. It is funny if Phil looks like dad that mom would like him so. Maybe her hope is just to marry him off to some girl.

Oh well, and I am a suspicious one. The beserking Will? we only have the prince's word on that one. How do we know that Will might just be squeamish . . . I'd do it to an ogre!