I like this very much. I can feel the cold. The ending is just right.

This seemed to me a poem very much propelled by personal experience, and very much to my taste. I love free verse where people can use the correct word to describe a sensation instead of forcing themselves to conform to a rhyme scheme. I really enjoyed this. It's like something I would write - except I think you're better than I was when I was your age. You get better all the time^^.

This is good.Rare. tight formation. Fluid. Kaytala I love it.keep up the good work.