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Chibi Princess 2009-07-19 . chapter 6
tis is an awesome story!
but i dnt get wat da title has to do wiv it
kenny is funny
cani be a character for (lets say 1 chapter?)
i love being a random character¬
¬.¬ is the look my bffs give me when i act my usual random way
Joana Argo Amoateng. 2009-03-13 . chapter 6
Well I must say you deserve all the flatters you could get. That was some good writing man,though it would be good if you wrote everything in full.Aside from that congratulations! you should try doing writing full time I'm into writing myself so if you are interested, we could do some collaboration. Oh! and well I like the flare.


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Could you please look up Sweet valley High's The London Series for me all three of them.
Ryo 2007-11-24 . chapter 6
gurl laftrip XD sna mas mahaba sa susunod...aja fight-o
Akizushi 2007-11-23 . chapter 1
*heart* I find this story quite funny and lovely. I was totally laughing when I was reading this at school and Kentoshi's character is really interesting...! I like the way you write and describe the scenes. I could imagine their expressions very well with your admirable usage of words...! I wonder when Kenny would tell Onisuke that he is in fact his best friend... XD I told this story to my friends and they also found the story quite interesting. I was day dreaming earlier some scenes that could possibly happen with Kenny and Mira... XD Like what if Kenny grew feelings for Mira while being her 'best friend' and then he-while-being-a-she admits his-while-being-a-her feelings for Mira... and Mira also had developed feeling for Kenny even though she thinks that she was being a lesbian and all. And then the day after their confession, Kenny finds out that he was already back to being a he... And because Mira didn't know about his secret regarding being a girl, he ends up being a stranger to her (I mean, they weren't close before he turned into a girl, ne?) which leaves Mira alone without her best friend Riku... XD

I think I've been day dreaming about your story too much that I already made up possible endings... XD I wish you update soon...
Oh! And I totally dislike Shiza... x.x She's such a bully... I've also seen the manga version of this and it's also quite good! I admire your work!! XD Sana po makilala kita in person! XDD KenMira is love~
mapusyaw 2007-08-15 . chapter 6
Yo! Where's the update? XD.

Gotta love the characterization; it's consistent. I visited the online manga and as much as I liked it, I prefer the written version. The manga had its good points but Kenny's more kick-** to me here, not to mention waay cockier. XD

This is Jap setting right? I suggest you keep Riku from calling Onisuke "chan". It's an honorific used only for close friends or family members and it was Kenny who was friends with Oni not Riku. Ya dig? It'll be too much of a give away not mention it might lead Oni to believe that Riku IS interested in him...but then again, you can always make him speculate such, hehe.

Oni was close friends with Kenny right? Bakit hindi man lang niya kinumusta si Kenny? To check his condition and all.

The way things are going, Kenny's bound to end with Mira! mwahahah! Though I'd really like to see some slash, mwehehe.

Hm, as much as I love the Filipino language, reading it here feels, I dunno...weird. I've always perceived our language to have a lot of nuances that are difficult to translate much less explain to foreigners so Kenny saying a perfect sentence and using the particle "ba" seemed a little off to me. Afterall, "ba" doesn't have an exact equivalent in other languages.

Mweh, this is already too long so I guess that's it for a while. Update soon okay? Btw, I love Kenny's bro. He reminds me of my guy buddies! XD
CrystallineEyes 2007-05-30 . chapter 6
Hmph.

Shiza's being a ** once again.

>_<

Anyways, i like your manga version of FLUNK.

Please update soon.

^^

Thanks.
CrystallineEyes 2007-05-30 . chapter 5
“I’m lonely; no one loves me, so I’m going to the garden to eat some worms.”

LOL!
CrystallineEyes 2007-05-30 . chapter 4
Oh my hyne...oh my hyne...

>_<

AH!

CrystallineEyes 2007-05-30 . chapter 3
OH MAN!

I'm sensing...revenge? WAH!

THIS IS SO good and funny!

Oh geez...!
CrystallineEyes 2007-05-30 . chapter 2
Yay! He'll be a girl! Cute...!

And...well...Oni actually means Demon, right?

Which means...

Eheheh...

^^
CrystallineEyes 2007-05-30 . chapter 1
Hey.

I love this piece.

^^

Please keep on updating.

It's really interesting.
Elizabeth Wisehart 2007-04-05 . chapter 3
Oh my goodness. That's great. I love your work, although you could use some more descriptive words. Other than that, I love it. can't wait to read more tomorrow.
Elizabeth Wisehart 2007-04-04 . chapter 1
I really like it. I really feel for Ken, and his relationship with Oni is (Although over-used) a sympathetic one that I'm sure almost everbody can relate to. Good choice. I can't wait to get to read more.
Identity Closed 2007-03-27 . chapter 6
Please, I beg of YOU! UPDATE! *adds 2 faves*
starrydawn 2007-02-15 . chapter 6
Hey. It's been a long itme since I've read this story. Great job, your improving.

This story is very funny and the main characters are really interesting, and interesting characters always make a story better. You can see that by how many reviews you have, lol.

Keep it up, and if your interested, I finally posted the 2nd chapter of Witch Robot Hisaki.

~SD
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