so the title is referring to something like jekyll and hyde, right? i liked this. some stanzas didn't flow as well as others. sometimes you stay with a pattern and other times you'd ditch it which i found to be distracting, but even so, i think that you did well on this. it actually reminds me (sort of) a poem that i wrote awhile ago called the person that is me. the idea of the mask and the person beneath the surface that no one sees. not too much alike but it reminded me of it nonetheless.