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Scrunchy
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseHeh, light, with undertones of darkness. My, that sounded deep. Much deeper than I meant it to be. But back to the story. In the typical style of your other writing, it's short, and not so much makes a point as offers some strange level of insight into somebody's life, yet from a third person viewpoint. Nice writing, and I'm glad to see a story, because I'm sure it's been a while (a short while, perhaps, but a while nonetheless).

Scrunchy
Pop-up book
2006-08-29
ch 1, anon.
abuse"i wonder if that penny needed a parachute when it dropped" i love that line. and all of it. x
hey maria
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseHeh. That was amusing.
Happy
2006-08-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh I LIKE, darling. Absolutely fabulous dialogue, an utterly terrific little story with imaginative ways in which to convey what Tina's actually thinking! Continue with this style.

Stay Happy, as ever.
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