i like it. i like the rhyming, it just flows all together.

It is nice to read rhyming poetry that flows so well. Your phrasing is wonderful. Thank you. A pleasure to read.

wowall your stuff is really, really amazingly good. i love it

and as an answer to your question, no i don't... i had a strange phase last year where i thought about it a lot, but i have a fear of pain and blood and stuff... so i never didi dont' think like that anymore though... and thanks for reviewing my stuff..again, i love the poem, and the ending really... fits

i like how you rhymed the poem every three lines, but didn't use stanzas. Unconventional, and appreciated. The poem itself was... obscure, as though the speaker wants to change everything, but this is effective, 'cos most people have many regrets. I liked this poem, but i do feel that you weren't able to easily convey your emotions; it was nice to read, but didn't really pull me in. Nicely done otherwise.