lol 'Cat'ostrophic. I really like this story. It's funny, completely original, and entertaining to read. I know you haven't updated this story in a long time, but it would be wonderful if you could. I shall be waiting expectantly. ^_^

~...* NightSkye 18 *...~

X3 that's so cute

uch!! ive wanted to review for this story since it was up! this is really good! whose captain justice? he sounds really dorky.. like one of those sterio typical comic books collecters dressing up for halloween... to me anyways... lol i just see this lanky dude with a red mask and a dorky suit with a red cape. lol lots of red. and yellow... cant forget the yellow. lol ooh! and when are u going to update personal trainer? huh, missy? get to it!! lol

I know, I already mentioned this... but I love your story. I've got another person hooked on it and another person who read it and found it hilarious!!

Keep up the good work (PLEASE) and update when you can.

I_A

more more more! plz?? i love this its so..original,,keep me updated!

This is a fab story so far. Can't wait to see where you go with it.

BAHAHAHAHA! Who knew someone could turn my crap, vague suggestions into a completely likeable story? I love this Toby guy, and also the lead character. She's strong, but not obnoxiously so, like those typical feminist Fictionpress girls who are all, "OHMIGOD, A BOY, KILL IT!"

Um... Yeah.

Yeah, so normally, I don't read brand new stories, but from the summary, I just had to check this one out.

Please go on, I beg you. It's a great story so far.

Good luck! (and please update)

I love it! It's original, no cliches!! Keep it up, it's funny