'Letters are our souvenirs from

what was supposed to last forever'

i love that line. thanks for the poem!

loved the title. thx for sharing.

this is such a sad poem! i think it speaks volumes because every person in this world has probably drifted away from someone who they once were very close to - i know i have. i just love it. keep writing! and thanks for the reviews. =)

i love it

So sweet and quiet true in fact. it is good that the first and last sentences brought the whole thing into a close, i like neat things like that. like fastening a bracelet.

there are many different kinds of friends and sometimes it does not matter if you don't know their surface, as long as they are sincere, then they will always be a friend to be counted on.

great poem, one suggestion though, it would be better to have stanzas, so it is more easily remembered so one scene doesn't merge into another.

thanks for your review!

Ryustorm

When you have time, try changing your setting to allow anonymous reviews- you can get lots more feedback that way!

I don't normally seek out and read poetry, but this was well-written. I like that it isn't bathetic like a lot of the poetry written nowadays. I also like how you describe the feeling and emotions so well.

Also glad to see you put your Compositions speeches up here! It's good to have other people's opinions, and you should get a good audiance here.