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| Eye of the Needle 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseSometimes I wish I knew where your ideas came from...they seem so familiar and yet so far away. So this is a boring media lesson and im taking a trip down memory lane...I love it! |
| alice is dying 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous and beautiful and heartbreaking-I loved this. You're an amazing writer, and I adore the name you've chosen for this piece. Brilliant, in a (not so) subtle way. I would really like to contact you/ask you some questions and because I don't want to 'spam to the review system' I was wondering if you had a AIM name? Unfortunately, I am unable to email anyone at this point in time. Fantastic poem. I look forward to more like it. ♥ Alice |
| the wilderness remains 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abusewow. this is beautiful! it seriously brought tears to my eyes. you really conjured up a beautiful image, and then brought it crashing down with the last line... god,it's heartbreaking. i especially love "and you danced like and ragged angel./In the reflection of the jagged light" and "my unspeaking park-bench prophet. honestly, an amazing poem! |
| dustytiger 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abusei really like this, at first i thought that the anonymous thing was so that the peice could be personalised to anyone, but it's actaully about someone you don't know their name, which makes it just really cool, this is an excellent peice it really is, it flows well, is wrtten beautifully, and got me thinking, great work thank you for sharing |