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| Kolostramin 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. I don't think much of this sort of poetry but this one reminds me more of a haiku than an acrostic, longer but still choppy--which, with this, isn't a bad thing. K. Stramin |
| Whisper of Death 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abusePretty good. ;) |
| dustytiger 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abusegreat work, not a huge fan of this kind of poetry, but this works because it doesn't seem random, it flows and sounds really nice all togehter, great work, that and i just love thunderstorms which is always good thank you for sharing |