Interesting. I don't think much of this sort of poetry but this one reminds me more of a haiku than an acrostic, longer but still choppy--which, with this, isn't a bad thing.
K. Stramin

Pretty good. ;)

great work, not a huge fan of this kind of poetry, but this works because it doesn't seem random, it flows and sounds really nice all togehter, great work, that and i just love thunderstorms which is always good thank you for sharing