That's tragically beautiful. Congratulations.

Oh wow, somehow I stumbled upon your profile, but I suppose boredom has its perks because I'm glad I did!

This is amazing and breath taking. Simple sentences, but it all built up as each line was read. There is nothing but truth in these words, and that only increased the intensity of emotion. I also enjoyed your emphasis on the word 'never.' Short, sweet, and hits you right in the heart.

I saw that you have tons of other poems just waiting to be read, so I'll be sure to make some time to check out more in the near future. Kudos to you because you are amazing. :)

Simplistic and powerful ; it painted a hundred pictures for me. Amazing job.

this is really beautiful and straight to the point.
~April~

I love this.. my only complaint is that it's so short. Make another chapter, maybe?

very true!

I liked this one too. You were able to say so much in just a few words. Kinda lot like me. Some people just like it to be longer all the time I guess

I like that. Could you have written a couple more lines? Well, just keep on written. Joey

whoa wonderful poem! i love it! such simplicity.. and so short. :)

-sarah

Simple, deep and to the point. That may not sounmd logical, bt I really enjoyed this poem.

~the Stranger in the moonlight~

Interesting and sad. I don't know what else to say *gives you choc-chip cookie*, enjoy and keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

LOVE IT!

Very interesting and beautiful, in a sad way. It sounds like it comes from some old fantasy novel. Well done indeed!

AH! I loved this! I loved your concept, I couldn't possibly pick out a favorite line either, because really, they were all great...

*ah* This is def. going on my fav. storeis list..

I don't even know what to say..I'm at a loss of words. This seems so simple, but yet, the meaning behind it isn't..it's a good point to really think about too...great job once again! *keep writing* and sorry about my EXTREME lack of words..(haha..looks at all i've written...er..or maybe not so much of a lack...*winks* ) keep it up!

~Britney

Wow, very good..u have a great way or writitng. Ilike it a lot^_^ Thanks 4 da review^^