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| a silenced revolution 2007-03-19 ch 1,  | abuseThat's tragically beautiful. Congratulations. |
| Morte d'Amour 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, somehow I stumbled upon your profile, but I suppose boredom has its perks because I'm glad I did! This is amazing and breath taking. Simple sentences, but it all built up as each line was read. There is nothing but truth in these words, and that only increased the intensity of emotion. I also enjoyed your emphasis on the word 'never.' Short, sweet, and hits you right in the heart. I saw that you have tons of other poems just waiting to be read, so I'll be sure to make some time to check out more in the near future. Kudos to you because you are amazing. :) |
| Haley Jo 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseSimplistic and powerful ; it painted a hundred pictures for me. Amazing job. |
| cruelnlove 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abusethis is really beautiful and straight to the point. ~April~ |
| The Angel of Your Nightmare 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI love this.. my only complaint is that it's so short. Make another chapter, maybe? |
| Hard Metal 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abusevery true! |
| Teddy Geiger 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI liked this one too. You were able to say so much in just a few words. Kinda lot like me. Some people just like it to be longer all the time I guess |
| Sargent Pepper 2006-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI like that. Could you have written a couple more lines? Well, just keep on written. Joey |
| sarah1491 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abusewhoa wonderful poem! i love it! such simplicity.. and so short. :) -sarah |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseSimple, deep and to the point. That may not sounmd logical, bt I really enjoyed this poem. ~the Stranger in the moonlight~ |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseInteresting and sad. I don't know what else to say *gives you choc-chip cookie*, enjoy and keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Guess 2006-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOVE IT! |
| Anaare 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting and beautiful, in a sad way. It sounds like it comes from some old fantasy novel. Well done indeed! |
| silentscreamer07 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseAH! I loved this! I loved your concept, I couldn't possibly pick out a favorite line either, because really, they were all great... *ah* This is def. going on my fav. storeis list.. I don't even know what to say..I'm at a loss of words. This seems so simple, but yet, the meaning behind it isn't..it's a good point to really think about too...great job once again! *keep writing* and sorry about my EXTREME lack of words..(haha..looks at all i've written...er..or maybe not so much of a lack...*winks* ) keep it up! ~Britney |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, very good..u have a great way or writitng. Ilike it a lot^_^ Thanks 4 da review^^ |