A nice little haiku. You kept the syllable count throughout. Try to keep it to one thought per line. More can be confusing or disrupt the flow of the poem, especially in one as short as a haiku.

Keep writing!

phantom_jedi

Relatable haiku. Very nice.

Wow this was really good.. Keep it Up!

Tragic, dramatic poem.. full of hidden emotions. I once felt like this most of the time. Great work!

I really like this. It's a great use of the haiku, because it's short and simple and definitely gets the message across. I really like this one a lot.

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i wish i had a dime for every time i felt that way.

Cool. Very nice. I know the feeling... Sometimes it sucks...