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Halcyon Impulsion 2008-10-23 . chapter 1
This is a gorgeous piece. I didn't feel like it was a mirror--I thought it was another person. My favorite part was this:

and how strange that I,
shrinking violet in green,
should be now so calm

Good work. I am catching up on old stuff I missed--this bot is from when you were fand :) Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Anaare 2006-09-04 . chapter 1
A wonderful, wonderful poem. One that I have truly enjoyed reading. Beautiful imagery! Well done and keep writing.
Anonymous 2006-08-29 . chapter 1
Must be a nice feeling. Whenever I look into the mirror, I feel completely overwhelmed and **.

I love the sense of calm.
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